Senin, 04 Maret 2019

Strength, Weakness, and Goal

Full of imagination, dream big, passionate, that's how I would like to describe myself. I am Aufa Putri Hammantyo, 16 years old girl who wanted to be a successful writer in the future, or maybe an illustrator, that will inspirate others through my works.

I have several strength that I can brag. I have wide imagination and that will help me create wonderful ideas. I can also manage myself, including my time and my money. Although sometimes I failed but at least I can do it. I also can learn new languages fast so I don't have to worry about language barrier. I like to pay attention to details so when I get serious into something, I'll dig to the deepest part of it. New knowledge? Count me in! I like to learn new things so I can learn almost everything. I also can describe things in detail, but unfortunately only in writings. I have experience in managing other people, whether it's the money or the activities. I have manage my juniors from extracurricular for competitions.

Despite all of that, as a human, I also have some weakness. Even though I am considered serious, I'm still a lazy person. I am not that confident in public, so I tend to stutter a lot when speaking in front of people. I am also having a hard time adapting with my surroundings, and also communicating. That is why I don't have that many friends. I'm bad at influencing other as a leader, I only can influence other from behind. I'm not a motivator type, so it's gonna be hard for me to move other.

I, as a human, have a dream that I wanted to pursue. First thing first, I want to make more friends, get better at communicating, and live happily. I want to pursue my dream as a writer, just like my role model Enid Blyton. On top of that, I like writing and I'm used to pouring my emotion through writings. I also wanted to be an animator or an illustrator, showing emotion through colours and linearts, delivering messages through illustration for those who can't understand words or just tired of reading too much words.

Senin, 12 November 2018

Exposition Text - Benefit of Writing


Invitation


Group
Host
Invitation Phrase
Kind of Event
Date
Time
Venue
Special Instruction
RSVP
Nabil
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
Amara
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
Raka
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
M. Farhan
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
M. Rifqi
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
Ahmad
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
Gilbert
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
Helena
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
Christian
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v


Senin, 13 Agustus 2018

Discussion Resume (Offer and Suggestion)

Group 1
Topic: Human Contact Makes Orang Utan Die
Pro: 
  • Human could bring disease when visiting orang utan.
  • Human should stay away 10m from the orang utan.
Con:
  • It's not always human who cause orang utan's disease.
  • The distance is almost impossible because orang utan population is so many.
Opinion: Human shouldn't be too close from orang utan because other that the diseases, it could make the orang utan stressed too. If human want to see orang utan, they should know the limit. 

Group 3
Topic: Underaged Marriage
Pro:
  • Early marriage gives chance for the couple to grow together.
  • Early marriage could avoid free sex.
Con:
  • The child is not ready for marriage yet, biologicaly, mentaly, and economicaly.
  • Child marriage makes the child could not grow like they should.
Opinion: Underaged marriage is something hard, because the child would not be ready to build a family and could cause something like cheating, domestic violence, and such. 

Group 4
Topic: Police's Plan to Sweep Man Eating Snake's Habitat 
Pro: 
  • Snake is extremily dangerous for the villager.
  • The snake was conciously attack the man, the man wasn't disturbing the snake.
Con:
  • The village was built at the snake's habitat.
  • Animals only have instinct.
Opinion: They should be a border between human's village and snake's habitat. Sure even if the snake just have instinct, they should have a reason to attack, whether it's hungry because the less of food, or disturbed because there's human activity near its habitat.

Group 5
Topic: Psycological Test for Driving License
Pro:
  • It's just a formality and the driver have to pay more.
  • The result migt be inacurate.
Con:
  • There are many drivers that can't control their emotion.
  • This could solve mental problem of the drivers.
Opinion: Psycological is one of the important thing, so drivers should accept the fact that they should do the test. It's for their sake as well.

Group 6
Topic: Community for Transgender Woman
Pro:
  • They need to socialize with each other.
  • They have to make a living.
Con:
  • Transgender people is wrong.
  • They shouldn't transgender in the first place.
Opinion: Transgender woman must've know about their consequences of being a transgender, so they should know how to make a living for themself. This kind of community could make it easier and it's good to make the world a better place.

Group 7
Topic: School Zoning System
Pro:
  • It has benefits for the students, the parents, and the school.
  • They won't feel tired, and make all school equal.
Con:
  • Some village are far from school.
  • If the students want to enroll, they must know the consequences.
Opinion: Regardless of the system, goverment should fix the infrastructure first. If they want to make all school equal, the teacher itself who should be arranged, not the enrolling system. A good educator could make a good output, which could rise the school's rank itself.

Group 8
Topic: Green Project for ASIAN Games Still Less Maximum
Pro:
  • Indonesia still have plenty of forest fires.
  • They should've prepare for it further.
Con:
  • It's impossible to change in such a short time.
  • Anytime is good to change.
Opinion: If Indonesia want to be a green country, they should've done it from long ago. This is one of the program which have long term effect so it should be prepared more.

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Bonus:

From the song, The Man Who Can't be Moved

Opinion: I think he was too drown with the past, he should've just move on, there's plenty of human in the earth.
Suggestion: He should look for someone else.
Offer: Should i introduce you to my friend?

Kamis, 03 Mei 2018

EDU PASSION 2018!

It's late already to upload this because the event ended long ago, but it's better late than never, right?

Here's my vlog at EDU PASSION 2018!



If there's a problem with the video, please refer to this link.

Happy watching!

Selasa, 17 April 2018

Enid Blyton, at the Heart of Every Childhood

Enid Blyton or Enid Mary Blyton was an english children’s book writer. She was born in Lordship Lane, East Dulwich, South London on 11 August 1897. She was the first child of Thomas Carey Blyton and Theresa Mary Hamilton.


Enid started school when she was ten years old, and became a popular student in school. With Mirabel Davies and Mary Attenborough, Enid made a magazine called "Dab", where Mirabel made a poems, Mary made the illustrations, and Enid made short stories.

Enid Mary Blyton. Source

Since childhood, Enid really likes to read. She liked Lewis Carroll’s "Alice In Wonderland", Louisa Alcott’s "Little Women", George Macdonald’s "The Princess and the Goblin", and R.N. Ballantyne’s "The Coral Island".

But, after Enid’s parents divorced, the condition is obviously made Enid feel devastated. That’s why she often writes, "his father did not pay attention to his family", "his father went away", "his father died", and other similar phrases in her stories.

Then Enid and her siblings were brought to Elm Road 14 in Beckenham, Kent. Overwhelmed with sadness, Enid begins to write and sent a number of her poems and stories mass media. Unfortunately it was always rejected. Nevertheless, at the age of fourteen, Enid won a poetry writing contest. At that time she received praise from Arthur Mee, a writer who encouraged her to continue writing.

When she get a chance to enroll in the Guildhall School of Music, Enid denied. Although it was her father's dream, Enid felt the writing path was her way of life.

Enid's relationship with her mother was not as good as Enid's relationship with her father. Instead, Enid found the ideal mother figure in Mabel Attenborough, the aunt of her schoolmate. Aunt Mabel encourages Enid to continue writing stories and poetry.

Still confused to continue her schooling, Enid is advised to take a vacation to the Hunt family farm in Suffolk and meet Ida Hunt who invites her to involved in teaching children. It was Ida who suggested Enid to go to the teacher's school. Finally, in September 1916, Enid was educated as a kindergarten teacher at Ipswich High School.

Althought, Enid had to stop writing fiction that she liked. But she never stopped to write poetry In fact, her poem titled “Have You” was published in Nash's Magazine in 1917. She was even more active writing.
Enid's poem titled "Have You". Source

After graduating in 1918, Enid became a child's private teacher. She is very liked, especially her fairy tale. Seeing the reaction of the students to the story and tale, Enid ventured to submit her work to the magazine. "Teachers` World" became a place to accommodate the works of Enid, even the editor of the magazine raised Enid to become a permanent writer with her own column named From My Window.

Since the book of poetry collection, "Child Whisper", distributed in 1922, Enid's career as a writer is growing. Subsequent books followed, every book was published by J. Saville & Newnes.

While in the publication of J. Saville & Newnes, Enid met Major Hugh Alexander Pollock, and fell in love. They finally married on 28 August 1924, and lived in Elfin Cottage, di Shortlands Road, Beckenham, Kent.

Enid's first husband, Hugh Alexander Pollock. Source

After her first child, Gillian, was born, Enid who still kept her obsession to write adult novels, began writing "The Caravan Goes On". However, her work was denied by publishers so she returned in writing children's stories.

Enid success make it inadequate that she often got drunk, and damaged her relationship with her husband. In 1942, Pollock divorced Enid with a record still allowed to meet their two daughters. Then Enid married Kenneth Darrell Waters, a surgeon, a year after the divorce.

Enid and her husband, Kenneth Darrel Waters. Source

In 1942 also, the famous series "Famous Five" began to be written. She writes the story of Julian, Dick, George, Ann, and a dog named Timmy every year. She wrote 21 titles in this series.

All titles of Famous Five series. Source

Enid's productivity is still ongoing. She also wrote "Secret Seven", "The Adventurer series", "The Mystery series" and "The Barney Mystery Books". And when World War II took place, she took care of printing every work. Even then she wrote ten thousand words per day.



Enid Blyton's series (Secret Seven, Adventure Series, and Mystery Series)
Source, here, here, here.

In 1945, she stopped filling the column in "Teachers' World". Then published "Little Noddy Goes to Toyland" which later became a famous series. Then in 1952, she published "Enid Blyton Magazine".

Her succes doesn’t mean she was not criticized. Between 1950 and 1960, her works are considered to emphasize the role of gender in a rigid and displays the values of middle-class casual. Her works were considered uneducated and withdrawn from public libraries, and even banned in schools. Some of hes writings are also mentioned not written by herself.

After "Enid Blyton Magazine" stopped publishing in late 1959, Enid's concentration to write began to disappear. Then her husband died in 1967. She herself followed on 28 November 1968 after writing about seven hundred books, spread all over the world.

Selasa, 06 Maret 2018

Announcement Activity

ACTIVITY 1

TEXT 1

Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Found 
The title : Hello Georgetown 
Contents
 Found
 Information about the shop that just opened in Georgetown, the opening date, the shop's location, and the shop's website. Also, there is a hiring opportunities at the shop.

Closing
 Not found
The contact information in the announcement is not for contact in general, and there is no detail about the shop itself.



TEXT 2

Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Found 
 Call for Proposal (Fund by European Commission)

Contents
 Found
Information about the need of virology and epidemiology of H5N1 in Indonesia to understand the virus H5N1. It is also informing the areas of research.

Closing
 Found
Website to the detailed information about the research like process, criteria, and proposal submission.























TEXT 3

Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Found 
 A title that announce the outgrew of the shop's old place.

Contents
Found 
 A list of the new address and also announce that the old place now used as a service center, still with the same address and phone number.

Closing
 Found
 The contact for the store.

















TEXT 4

Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Not found 
 The announcement doesn't has a title and directly saying the content.

Contents
Found 
 Announcement about a business that going to open some branches in several big cities—Medan, Denpasar, Lombok, and Makassar.

Closing
 Found
They hope that they can conduct their business and be able to meet closely with their costumer, and also stores in more effective manners.
























ACTIVITY 2

Answers :
NO
TEXT
TRUE/FALSE
1
TEXT A
 TRUE
2
TEXT B
 FALSE
3
TEXT C
 FALSE
4
TEXT D
 TRUE
5
TEXT E
 TRUE









ACTIVITY 3

Text
Main Idea
Details
Text 1
 Informing the people of Georgetown about the opening of a Suit Shop in a new venue.
  • The announcement came from J.Crew Store
  • The opening will be in April, 2013
  • The shop will offer more of men’s and women’s, weddings and parties collection.
Text 2


Text 3


Text 4